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A tingly feeling inside
A lose of words
We flip our hair
Make fun of him
Talk nonstop to him
To let him get a hint
Of how you feel
We smile nonstop
And blush when we see him
The one we think we like
We purposely bump into him
To get his attention
To make him notice us
We talk really loud
When he walks by
To get even more noticed
We talk about him all the time
He wont get out of our heads
The boy that we stalk
To learn everything about him
Turns out to be a fake
We feel so heartless
Sorrow takes over us
But we hide it from everybody
So they cant see how we feel about him
©2008-2009 ~Itachi-Lover14
:iconitachi-lover14:

Author's Comments

This is a free vers poem that i had made up for my english assignment. It shows what girls do to get a guy to notice them. It tells how we feel when the guy u like doesnt like u back or isnt wat he seems. dont ask where this came from bc i have no idea :P any advice or comments plz tell me :D ^^

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:iconsakuraharuno4eva:
AWWWW :aww: THAT IS SOOO CUTE!!!

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I gots banned o.o...
:iconitachi-lover14:
tank u! :hug: i'm glad u like it! i showed it to alot of my friends at school before i turned it in and they said that they loved so i posted it wanting to know wat yall thought of it :D

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:iconstarfireandgoth4ever:
it's so beautiful!
i admit that i acctually did some of those things once to get a guys attention, so i can relate to that poem. very well structured!

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......MINDFREAK!!!!!!!!
:iconitachi-lover14:
awww thank you! i just thought of a topic and started to write it for a english project and this is what came out. I did some of those things too but the funny thing is that i wrote this poem without thinking of a a guy bc i dont really like anyone right now. it was kinda weird, but it turned out for the best :D

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:iconstarfireandgoth4ever:
yay!

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......MINDFREAK!!!!!!!!
:iconivan-rey:
I'll show it to my english teacher.... -_-
good....

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